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1-Jul-03/12:15 PM |
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I wanted the ended to be stronger because the build up's great, but then, fizzle fizzle nothing.
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| Re: he's so good looking by GAY AS FU*K |
1-Jul-03/12:17 PM |
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You sound straight to me.
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| Re: 9/2/2003 by cpill |
1-Jul-03/12:24 PM |
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| Re: your great by GAY AS FU*K |
1-Jul-03/12:26 PM |
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1-Jul-03/12:46 PM |
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"thte" What's that? A pub in Wales?
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| Re: Standing by the Sea by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
1-Jul-03/1:20 PM |
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Why would you put that last paragraph in? Are you so insecure you need to explain yourself explaining yoursef? Good God, it was fine up until that stab at humor.
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1-Jul-03/1:25 PM |
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I raise the pot by throwing in my :, and a borrowed colon, and call you on it. lol
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| Re: Good prevails by DeadtotheWorld |
1-Jul-03/1:29 PM |
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Jesus, right when I think your poetry has hit rock fucking moist stinky lightless bottom, you holler out "China or bust", and start digging again. Amazing.
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| Re: Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus |
1-Jul-03/1:33 PM |
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This is by far one of your best, I would lose that "people move away" entirely, and end with a period after "things change".
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2-Jul-03/10:34 AM |
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I can't, look how fat my ankles are in these heels?!
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2-Jul-03/10:39 AM |
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Jumping Jimenys. (with a swede's tongue)
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2-Jul-03/10:42 AM |
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Certainly, not listening to sigh, anyways or bussing across America.
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2-Jul-03/10:44 AM |
"THERE ONCE WAS MAN NAMED GANUS
WHO WAS SHOCKED BY POEMRANKER'S SAMENESS
SO SOME POEMS HE WROTE
AND THE SAMENESS HE SMOTE
BUT IN HIS HASTE HE FORGOT ABOUT THE CRACKUS". LOL
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| Re: Teen Hardcore by Johnnie Baptiste |
2-Jul-03/10:47 AM |
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You are SO! imaginitively vague & aloofa. Perhaps try Xraying your scrotum a 1000 times a day for added appeal.
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| Re: Its Blue by aurora |
2-Jul-03/5:29 PM |
It Glue (Gluekue) by Caught at the pump
Wow man... That good glue
Will you light my balls on fire
Do it for the Sky!
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| Re: Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Jul-03/10:13 PM |
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Margaret, did you blue six poor Baba out of symbolic feminism, or mysogenistic lesbianism? watch this i'll give myself a zero and weep on your boob.
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| Re: My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II |
3-Jul-03/10:30 PM |
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This reminds me of one of those cards you would give your teacher, when everyone would sign it, remember? When they would be sick, and dying and beeping in a gernie? Well, unfortunately, I unlike those others who have left the heat of the kitchen, am a professional chef. I am prepared to never leave. I have a legacy of poetry to archive & I'm quite happy here in my studies. Carry on people, and know that I was personaly moved be your heart felt testimonials and observations of our under appreciated relationships. You have all touched me deeply. Thank You, and God bless you. And God Bless America.
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| Re: Its Blue by aurora |
3-Jul-03/10:39 PM |
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| Re: Misgivings by Topaz Servias |
4-Jul-03/11:12 AM |
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An honorable path. A good poem.
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| Re: Fall Of The Heartlands by Mr Pig |
4-Jul-03/11:19 AM |
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12,000 but who's counting. An enjoyable read.
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