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Its Blue (Free verse) by aurora
I wonder why you can't Touch the sky And why is it blue Or do you just imagine that too? I guess its like life Is it real or do you just halucinate Cause i think I am My life is not real And i dont understand I want to know Where people go Or do you just imagine that too It must be like the sky. Imagining its Blue.

Up the ladder: shadows of love
Down the ladder: Reminders...

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8938
Posted: July 2, 2003 4:32 PM PDT; Last modified: July 3, 2003 8:43 AM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 2-Jul-03/5:29 PM | Reply
It Glue (Gluekue) by Caught at the pump

Wow man... That good glue
Will you light my balls on fire
Do it for the Sky!
[4] deleted user @ 12.219.155.182 > horus8 | 2-Jul-03/11:37 PM | Reply
Nice poem.

"horus8' - why don't you find something useful to do? Ever try being nice? Didn't your Mama breast feed you?
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > deleted user | 3-Jul-03/10:38 PM | Reply
My mother left me in the wilderness Margaret.

If you think this is a poem, on a beginners level you're right.

I wouldn't touch my mothers tit with your mouth Margaret so go fuck a Volkswagon, trunk rat.

I happen to be very nice. Charming actually, would you like to see me be a gentleman?
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 68.75.22.35 | 3-Jul-03/12:09 AM | Reply
try trippin on shrooms
i've never tried it
but i've heard it will change colors
[7] richa @ 81.86.249.124 | 3-Jul-03/9:33 AM | Reply
a tad meaningless

nice poetic style though
[6] DurtKL @ 68.75.22.35 | 3-Jul-03/10:41 AM | Reply
eifel 65
or watever
that nasty euro techno trash band comes to mind

:( bad thoughts
yet pleasant poetry
i'm torn
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 3-Jul-03/11:17 AM | Reply
No, she didn't breast feed me, she did giving birth.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 3-Jul-03/10:39 PM | Reply
Sorry
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