Reminders...

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

They plague me every moment tearing my world apart taunting me with great joy knowing I long for such moments but alas, it cannot be so to see an angelic beauty pass blessing all with her heavenly light basking in her beauty reminding me every moment of what I will never possess two lovers in soft embrace engulfed in the love they share to see love's splendor reminding me always of what I shall never find friends and family the looks of joy upon each and every face content with their lives reminding me once more of what I will never truly feel Every moment I ask God why can't that be me but no answer comes to me only grim reminders what lies ahead leaving a trail of lonely shadows and shattered dreams only reminders of what will never be

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5 votes so far. Yours would make 6.5 votes so far

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[7] Shardik 3-Aug-03/7:00 PM Reply

And so goes life at the disco after 2:00 pm.

[7] Shardik › Shardik 3-Aug-03/7:00 PM Reply

I meant AM dammit. lol

[n/a] <~> › Shardik 4-Aug-03/5:27 PM Reply

it's the same, but less sad, at 2 p.m.

[8] LuckyJoe 4-Aug-03/5:17 PM Reply

I can feel it. Been that and had those feelings. Hurts to see the one you want more than anything walk away and out of your life. Hurts even more when you know they want the same things you want just can't have them. Reasons for not being able to have them due to the time of meeting in life. Such as both heading to different states for college. My heart feels for the pain and love which you speek of. Keep on writing and good luck. (Was giving 7 but here's 8 because I felt the pain spoke about.)