poemranker ::beauty by nolan

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Free verse № 59120

beauty

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Aug 2003 · 3 comments

could you find beauty, in a cold and dark place where no words can be heard with no light on a lonely face? could you find beauty, where all else has failed where the hand grabs tightly in a place you once sailed? can beauty be taken, from high in the sky a suicide note saying my time to die? could beauty be found, in an over used statement of truth and pain hidden under pavement? can you take beauty, out of a cracked shell into a small room know as a living hell? can you see beauty, in every breathe you take around your existence in everything you make? i have heard beauty, is in the eye of the beholder and i only see beauty in your eyes getting older

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[7] http://mulberryfairy 4-Aug-03/10:34 AM Reply
Change breathe to breath.
No need to remind us of the cliche "beauty is in the eye of the beholder".
[5] <~> 4-Aug-03/10:39 AM Reply
[n/a] nolan › <~> 6-Aug-03/1:25 AM Reply
good poem