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beauty (Free verse) by nolan
could you find beauty, in a cold and dark place where no words can be heard with no light on a lonely face? could you find beauty, where all else has failed where the hand grabs tightly in a place you once sailed? can beauty be taken, from high in the sky a suicide note saying my time to die? could beauty be found, in an over used statement of truth and pain hidden under pavement? can you take beauty, out of a cracked shell into a small room know as a living hell? can you see beauty, in every breathe you take around your existence in everything you make? i have heard beauty, is in the eye of the beholder and i only see beauty in your eyes getting older

Up the ladder: Reminders...
Down the ladder: four walls

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8945
Posted: August 4, 2003 12:13 AM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 12:13 AM PDT
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[7] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.144.59 | 4-Aug-03/10:34 AM | Reply
Change breathe to breath.
No need to remind us of the cliche "beauty is in the eye of the beholder".
[5] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 4-Aug-03/10:39 AM | Reply
[n/a] nolan @ 65.93.24.70 > <~> | 6-Aug-03/1:25 AM | Reply
good poem
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