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beauty (Free verse) by nolan
could you find beauty,
in a cold and dark place
where no words can be heard
with no light on a lonely face?
could you find beauty,
where all else has failed
where the hand grabs tightly
in a place you once sailed?
can beauty be taken,
from high in the sky
a suicide note
saying my time to die?
could beauty be found,
in an over used statement
of truth and pain
hidden under pavement?
can you take beauty,
out of a cracked shell
into a small room
know as a living hell?
can you see beauty,
in every breathe you take
around your existence
in everything you make?
i have heard beauty,
is in the eye of the beholder
and i only see beauty
in your eyes getting older
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Posted: August 4, 2003 12:13 AM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 12:13 AM PDT
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No need to remind us of the cliche "beauty is in the eye of the beholder".