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four walls (Free verse) by crwncka1
though these walls of mine, right here where I stay, I now see the clues, that will show the way, for my sweet love, to return home to me, looking straight ahead, I see only my shadow, casting dark on the wall, peering left now, my shadow disappears, allowing me to see the map, my baby needs, to find her way home, now turning around, my shadow casts a refection, for just a quick moment, I see where my love is at, now looking right, I finally see, my baby right in front of me

Up the ladder: beauty

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8941
Posted: August 11, 2003 2:41 PM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2003 2:41 PM PDT
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[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Aug-03/6:57 PM | Reply
Your baby needs to bite off your fat bitch nipple. Pear assed hacks.
[7] cyan9 @ 217.40.63.105 | 19-Jan-06/1:34 AM | Reply
Reminds me of the film Labyrinth at the end with the staircases
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