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(getting used to spending too much time with myself) (Free verse) by Patsy i got my gravel legs back
fast
i'm like a 3 ton truck-
somewere in me is an unshaven
triple divorcee chain smoker
and somewhere else is a cold crate
full of ice cream.
Up the ladder:
four walls
Down the ladder:
Blind Sight
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Posted: August 11, 2003 9:13 PM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2003 9:13 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9523187 Overall Rank: 8948 Comments:
I liked it.
Very ... now? present? here? not quite sure *what*, exactly, but it's there. In general, alive.
no "pretenses", at any rate. 202 view(s)
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That first line kicks anus!