poemranker ::Blind Sight by Nirvana13666

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Free verse № 61653

Blind Sight

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Aug 2003 · 2 comments

I can’t see Yet seeing you through my eyes shut tight I believe In the inner core of lust A shadow you are to me A sound in the vast eternity Rushing up on to me And then you leave You left me feeling suicidal I bleed But each drop of blood won’t bring you back to me I can’t see But I saw you ripping through me Blaming me The suicidal sacrifice for the inner core of lust I bleed I’m not through with you Passion leads to the envy of trust I see you through my eyes tightly shut

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2 comments

[8] horus8 21-Aug-03/11:38 AM Reply
Much better.
[6] SupremeDreamer 21-Aug-03/1:44 PM Reply
blessed with 6.