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Blind Sight (Free verse) by Nirvana13666
I can’t see Yet seeing you through my eyes shut tight I believe In the inner core of lust A shadow you are to me A sound in the vast eternity Rushing up on to me And then you leave You left me feeling suicidal I bleed But each drop of blood won’t bring you back to me I can’t see But I saw you ripping through me Blaming me The suicidal sacrifice for the inner core of lust I bleed I’m not through with you Passion leads to the envy of trust I see you through my eyes tightly shut

Down the ladder: Robe Lowe, Me and Icecream

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8948
Posted: August 21, 2003 8:54 AM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2003 8:54 AM PDT
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[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Aug-03/11:38 AM | Reply
Much better.
[6] SupremeDreamer @ 66.52.155.80 | 21-Aug-03/1:44 PM | Reply
blessed with 6.
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