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Blind Sight (Free verse) by Nirvana13666
I canât see
Yet seeing you through my eyes shut tight I believe
In the inner core of lust
A shadow you are to me
A sound in the vast eternity
Rushing up on to me
And then you leave
You left me feeling suicidal
I bleed
But each drop of blood wonât bring you back to me
I canât see
But I saw you ripping through me
Blaming me
The suicidal sacrifice for the inner core of lust
I bleed
Iâm not through with you
Passion leads to the envy of trust
I see you through my eyes tightly shut
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8948
Posted: August 21, 2003 8:54 AM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2003 8:54 AM PDT
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