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Blind Sight (Free verse) by Nirvana13666

I can’t see Yet seeing you through my eyes shut tight I believe In the inner core of lust A shadow you are to me A sound in the vast eternity Rushing up on to me And then you leave You left me feeling suicidal I bleed But each drop of blood won’t bring you back to me I can’t see But I saw you ripping through me Blaming me The suicidal sacrifice for the inner core of lust I bleed I’m not through with you Passion leads to the envy of trust I see you through my eyes tightly shut

horus8 21-Aug-03/11:38 AM
Much better.




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