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shadows of love (Free verse) by crwncka1
This secret inside of a riddle i pondered,
as I sat there all alone,
casting away seashells in the ocean,
watching the ripple of the tide return in,
as this day was now turning to dusk,
I saw the most beautiful of sunsets,
with soft rays of yellow, gold and orange.
The day would eventually fade into darkness,
as I now felt though the clear night sky,
the fresh cool breeze in from the sea,
with the sounds of ship horns in the distance,
I stood there waiting in the sand,
for my true love that was promised to be.
As though the darkness I've been,
where everything is broken and sad,
and now I find myself here,
as I see in the far distance,
a light though this darkness of hate,
that is being cast 'round and 'round,
reflecting off of the ocean waters,
from a lighthouse in the distance.
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Posted: June 28, 2003 2:49 AM PDT; Last modified: June 28, 2003 2:49 AM PDT
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