poemranker ::9/2/2003 by cpill

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Free verse № 54418

9/2/2003

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Jun 2003 · 9 comments

There is a darkness in destiny People emerge and submerge Cheek kissing, pushing for space Peering into them like crystal caves, underwater at night. I wonder if they can hear me, if they hear. Move the candle across the room and the shadows scamper, appear and disappear: a new place brings a spark of fear What's the ghost lurking here, What's the ghost lurking here. Decidedly it is quaint to be quaint and can the window be opened for air? Open a window to breath. Fate moves things on, like a policeman, Nothing to see here, Nothing to see here.

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9 comments

[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jun-03/8:38 PM Reply
Actually Not true at all. Plenty to see her. I like. I'm looking forward to more. -8-
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom › thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jun-03/8:38 PM Reply
*Plenty to see here
[n/a] wCUNTw › thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Jul-03/4:25 AM Reply
*Jason is gay
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom › wCUNTw 1-Jul-03/6:03 AM Reply
*Only when your Mother ask me to dinner a movie and some lovin's later at her place.
[n/a] wCUNTw › thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Jul-03/8:57 AM Reply
*Go suck a rat's ass, you bitch
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom › wCUNTw 1-Jul-03/9:39 AM Reply
Hmmm.. Tempting as your offer might be how bout no.
[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 1-Jul-03/3:55 AM Reply
Very good indeed, sir. I would like to see more.
[6] maffy 1-Jul-03/8:37 AM Reply
P.F.G 6
[6] horus8 1-Jul-03/12:24 PM Reply
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