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9/2/2003 (Free verse) by cpill
There is a darkness in destiny
People emerge and submerge
Cheek kissing, pushing for space
Peering into them like crystal caves, underwater at night.
I wonder if they can hear me, if they hear.
Move the candle across the room and the shadows scamper, appear and
disappear: a new place brings a spark of fear
What's the ghost lurking here,
What's the ghost lurking here.
Decidedly it is quaint to be quaint and can the window be opened for air?
Open a window to breath.
Fate moves things on, like a policeman,
Nothing to see here,
Nothing to see here.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5454545
Weighted score: 5.7727275
Overall Rank: 1754
Posted: June 30, 2003 6:31 PM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2003 6:31 PM PDT
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