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9/2/2003 (Free verse) by cpill
There is a darkness in destiny People emerge and submerge Cheek kissing, pushing for space Peering into them like crystal caves, underwater at night. I wonder if they can hear me, if they hear. Move the candle across the room and the shadows scamper, appear and disappear: a new place brings a spark of fear What's the ghost lurking here, What's the ghost lurking here. Decidedly it is quaint to be quaint and can the window be opened for air? Open a window to breath. Fate moves things on, like a policeman, Nothing to see here, Nothing to see here.

Up the ladder: Ode to Larkbeat Twoshoes
Down the ladder: Musings: Willow Sculpture

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5454545
Weighted score: 5.7727275
Overall Rank: 1754
Posted: June 30, 2003 6:31 PM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2003 6:31 PM PDT
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[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 30-Jun-03/8:38 PM | Reply
Actually Not true at all. Plenty to see her. I like. I'm looking forward to more. -8-
*Plenty to see here
[n/a] wCUNTw @ 195.157.153.253 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 1-Jul-03/4:25 AM | Reply
*Jason is gay
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 198.234.216.118 > wCUNTw | 1-Jul-03/6:03 AM | Reply
*Only when your Mother ask me to dinner a movie and some lovin's later at her place.
[n/a] wCUNTw @ 195.157.153.253 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 1-Jul-03/8:57 AM | Reply
*Go suck a rat's ass, you bitch
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 > wCUNTw | 1-Jul-03/9:39 AM | Reply
Hmmm.. Tempting as your offer might be how bout no.
[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253 | 1-Jul-03/3:55 AM | Reply
Very good indeed, sir. I would like to see more.
[6] maffy @ 62.105.116.77 | 1-Jul-03/8:37 AM | Reply
P.F.G 6
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Jul-03/12:24 PM | Reply
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