Re: hurricane love by crwncka1	28-Jun-03/9:09 AM
What's a polar shift than, The love of one pole for another. THE GAYE! hate must be what makes my microwave beep than, huh.
Re: location 999 by crwncka1	28-Jun-03/9:11 AM
Try a shower and a brisk walk.
Re: shadows of love by crwncka1	28-Jun-03/9:13 AM
Or a lighter in the crowd.
Re: Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Jun-03/1:45 PM
Ack Bassward (freeverse) by TPBOD edited by horus8 Woke up early. Right around sunset. Made myself a bowl of whiskey ala cancer stick. Gobbled it down, and followed it up black label to red with a screwdriver (a flathead). Walked outside to my tone lemon motor tryke. Got on and drove to the lake. Four miles off a dirty road on a child's bike. So here I am. Just sitting on the shore of this Salton Sea inferno impersonating a hangout. When along comes this girl with a shake as clout. She's selling her virginity first hand over fist. So I figure why not? After all, her glow is kinda first & last kiss. I no sooner have it than she goes whore. Being a new virgin and naive to what explored, she took it back from me changed but not sore. Bitterly disappointed I ran off in a huff. After walking for an hour, gone mad in the buff I reached the dirtiest roads end. Where the pavement begins. But being of foul temperament & nude, I decide to use my thumb to pull a ride. Along came a biker, he said, "Tis warmer inside". Still retaining all of my stupidity, I decided against my better judgment brilliantly. and got on the back with a smack. Shortly there after, I was brought to the bar where he gathered with his pack. With Mod whispers they talked of things that could be. Sensing my impending doom I optioned to flee. A smokey bar with guards at the exits, but none watching the bathroom. So I walk in proclaiming 'a lizard drain', and whom should I meet with nothing to gain? A man clearly not able to hold his own liquor. So he held everyone elses & slept on the floor. Much as I hated myself, I stole his floral blouse. I then proceed to sneak out the window and creep out to where my mustached host had parked. I watched in terror as they pulled the drunken lout out where he was beatin stinky with a trout. Oddly enough the police arrived shortly there after and I was put into a cage for being nude without a gown or a cathater. I told my story convincing with winks Until a shrink came in with a pen, but no ink. Suddenly I was two feet tall, and the cat lost my tongue. I ended up confessing to everything. Boy the songs this bird sung. There after in the cell right next to me. Was a man selling more than his dignity. For a cigarette and a favor, I didn't intend to live up too, he let me have it, twice, what can a boy do?. Shortly there after, again, I managed to convince them that I was insane. They put me alone in my cell and the shrink came once again, this time with ink and no name. Again I became two mighty scared feet, but this time I ran out under all of their heat. I threw myself in through a laundry shoot. In the washing machine room I got to feeling cleaner and grew back. Maybe if I dressed like them they'd cut me some slack? I left twirling my night stick & never looked back.
Re: Herne by OneFingerAnswer	29-Jun-03/1:55 PM
"In that boggy bottom plight" "He rode upon the bay" Unless he owns it?
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jun-03/2:28 PM
You must have got a laugh out of that blue ten at least?
Re: Forsaken Faults by DeadtotheWorld	29-Jun-03/2:33 PM
Boy, when I watch the gears in your mind spin, I have to reassure myself that there's always sundials just in case me and you are the last two alive.
Re: Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Jun-03/5:20 PM
Because in the real world that wouldn't happen, and in a imaginary world it would be considered unimaginatively boring, unorganic as far as the story goes, and irrelevant first off. Secondly, it's not my style, I tailored it to you. If it was mine, it wouldn't be posted because it has NO focus, no center. What you've done here is invented something better left to lie around longer in the hopes of being put to better use than that. 1) It's horrendously long. 2) has the shape of pigeon shit on a slow moving vehicle. 3) Attempts wildly to be cool and different, but insteads winds up cold and humorless. 4) Starts off at something worth writing about & ends up at something not worth reading entirely. Muwahhaha or not. 5) Writing is an exercise in communicating specific ideas. not to listen to yourself be unspecific
Re: Have you by XangryXblondeX	29-Jun-03/6:53 PM
Have you ever beaten yourself unrecognizable with a poorly strung tennise racket?
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jun-03/11:50 AM
Nick, it goes, vagina, spice, then desert planet, and shouldn't there be a worm too somewhere in the middle? now, for a senseless plug. HORUS8 will be performing tonight from 7 to 8:30 at the Atelier cafe in Echo Park, Ca. There will be naked hermaphrodites and milkshakes plus a midget that can blow himself. This is a rare event since horus8 has been under lock and key for a year, so this will be an opportunity to witness exciting new material and regurgitated other stuff, or not.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jun-03/11:53 AM
lol
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jun-03/11:59 AM
I wonder if your pain is aware that it's hiding John? Is your pain based on a suburban raison bran crisis too, because my soul's just been in the shitter since my bowl of raison bran made my parents seperate, I blame my irregular bowel movements for it all, that's why my pain is hiding under my skin, how about you? How about a hug?
Re: Obsidian Reflection by SupremeDreamer	30-Jun-03/2:12 PM
pudendom, lol. Good, much better, you've taken some risks here and I did see an imaginitive improvement. It still shit, but I chuckled quite a bit and that's big in my little world "Named Dreamer Supreme". lol, you crack me up, here's an eight so skate. You're lucky I'm performing this eve and I'm giddy.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jun-03/2:49 PM
Too funny, yep, I was there.
Re: STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck	30-Jun-03/4:50 PM
Dude, I love you, you beat me to it.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/10:49 AM
Yep
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/10:51 AM
A cramped gerbal starving for oxygen and a nappy.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/11:58 AM
Right.
Re: Apparently you missed the Memo by Luzr	1-Jul-03/12:07 PM
Here's a quote from White knuckled Phillip "Shut the fuck up & pass me the ketchup you pretentious twat". Because, honestly, What then? What the fuck should this do? Motivate me to read more highschool mandatory staple boring crud? Because, in case you hadn't noticed a legless armless shrapnel disembowled uneducated child in a third world war riddled country can't eat an Oscar Wilde qoute for sustenance or wrap themselves up in a warm Will Durant for the night can they idiot? Nobody gives a frozen-fuck about how informed you assume that you are, shut the fuck up and go make yourself another hero sandwich you fucking sorry piece of shit..
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/12:14 PM
Sorry, but the houses around here twitch often it's called an earthquake.