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hurricane love (Free verse) by crwncka1
If love isn't all you need, My soul would die today. For it is love and only love, That one day will relieve human suffering, Every last bit of misery. Its the true force of bliss, Known to all our universe. It makes our world spin 'round. That is the power of love. In becoming aware of this great power, All the pain from within, The fear, hate, and sorrow, Drowns away with the strength, Of a full blown hurricane. The power that love fully is, When expressed not repressed, Creates a force to devastate, Just like a twenty foot tidal surge, Hitting along the coast of Louisiana, Somewhere close to New Orleans. All the pain from within, Simply cannot stand this awesome force, This most powerful force of nature, And its forever gone. The surge blasts the coast, Devastating all that is around, The city now floats, Until all is finally washed down. Course this is symbolically speaking, Of the full blown power that love will be, If you just surrender all your trust, Let all your fears diminish, With trueness to your heart, Let this wonderful force of nature, Take full hold of you. Keep this in mind also, Love and god are one of the same.

Up the ladder: Shapeless Love
Down the ladder: SupremeDreamer

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9335
Posted: June 28, 2003 2:52 AM PDT; Last modified: June 28, 2003 2:52 AM PDT
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Comments:
[7] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.163.16 | 28-Jun-03/5:43 AM | Reply
Subject: cliche, I've seen thousands like it. 7
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Jun-03/9:09 AM | Reply
What's a polar shift than, The love of one pole for another. THE GAYE! hate must be what makes my microwave beep than, huh.
[5] Angelicasassy @ 72.40.4.69 | 5-Feb-06/6:43 PM | Reply
I love the opening line, but then the poem kinda loses its power for me.
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