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Obsidian Reflection (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
I finger fucked myself into oblivion,
While staring into an obsidian
Mirror.
Discovering terror
That slept within:
The spirit that decided to begin
A dream voyage using animalistic lust.
Requiring the explosion
Of the aspiring poets pudendum
And prick.
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To ignite explosion:
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Achieve chemical alteration
Of thought, without
Requesting pot.
He accomplished it with the stroke
Of flesh, which exploded
Into sticky string galaxies.
Now called the milky way.
Results pointed to a new
Dreamers ability to create
Imagination fantasy code.
To program new,
Systematic-euphoric, style.
It could take ten years
Grey hair appears
Reflected from the obsidian
Mirror.
A forbidden emotion surges
Called challenge.
Now comes the saga
Of an extreme resolve
To evolve:
From puerile mental universe
Into united power processing
Named Dreamer Supreme.
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[I'm not sure if i accomplished giving my poetry style, but I'll go out
on a limb and call this my first attempt at it]
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Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2936
Posted: June 30, 2003 11:25 AM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2003 11:25 AM PDT
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