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location 999 (Free verse) by crwncka1
With just a bed on the floor, a phone without a cord, in this place i reside, in eternal loneliness, as nothing ever seems to change, here in this place that no longer, even exists on this physical plane. As today i' am now aware, that no longer this timeless loop, without a clock on the wall, the calendar dated four years behind, is no longer the lost dimension, that swirls in place, forever in a loop of circles, time never advancing only receding. As today I've finally found, the one way out, of this hellish place. The key appears seemly from nowhere, just in front of me. As i reach out for it, it vanishes into thin air. Along with everything else, at location 5209 rutland ave.

Up the ladder: Sittin Here
Down the ladder: falling

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10469
Posted: June 28, 2003 2:51 AM PDT; Last modified: June 28, 2003 2:51 AM PDT
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[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Jun-03/9:11 AM | Reply
Try a shower and a brisk walk.
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