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location 999 (Free verse) by crwncka1

With just a bed on the floor, a phone without a cord, in this place i reside, in eternal loneliness, as nothing ever seems to change, here in this place that no longer, even exists on this physical plane. As today i' am now aware, that no longer this timeless loop, without a clock on the wall, the calendar dated four years behind, is no longer the lost dimension, that swirls in place, forever in a loop of circles, time never advancing only receding. As today I've finally found, the one way out, of this hellish place. The key appears seemly from nowhere, just in front of me. As i reach out for it, it vanishes into thin air. Along with everything else, at location 5209 rutland ave.

horus8 28-Jun-03/9:11 AM
Try a shower and a brisk walk.




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