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Sittin Here (Free verse) by psikosis Sitting here, all alone,
feelings inside, making me hide.
I think of you all day long,
telling myself, just be strong.
It will get better, you will see, I say.
Knowing it comes closer everyday.
I do it for you, I do it for us,
and in that I do trust.
Up the ladder:
Burning Fire
Down the ladder:
location 999
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Posted: June 13, 2003 8:50 PM PDT; Last modified: June 13, 2003 8:50 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8569565 Overall Rank: 10469 Comments:
I concure with Richa. It's too loose.
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Try get to the root of the feeling and its relation to other things