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Free verse № 52909

Sittin Here

by psikosis

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Jun 2003 · 2 comments

Sitting here, all alone, feelings inside, making me hide. I think of you all day long, telling myself, just be strong. It will get better, you will see, I say. Knowing it comes closer everyday. I do it for you, I do it for us, and in that I do trust.

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2 comments

[n/a] richa 14-Jun-03/10:42 AM Reply
No, this is too obvious the rhyme/ the sentiment

Try get to the root of the feeling and its relation to other things
[6] horus8 15-Jun-03/1:58 PM Reply
I concure with Richa. It's too loose.