poemranker ::Burning Fire by EckoSolider

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Free verse № 47269

Burning Fire

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Apr 2003 · 2 comments

The burning fire in my heart Is the love that is burning for you The things that you did to me Turned my heart from fire to ice Because you shot any hopes for me to love again If all you should of said if you were sorry I would have forgave you I believed that our love would play on for eternity But since its not ill keep striving to find another love like you

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[0] d35 16-Apr-03/9:42 AM Reply
i don't like it
[3] Shardik 16-Apr-03/2:53 PM Reply
"Solider"!!!!! GOD DAMNIT! HAND SALUTE! atteas "solider". you're excused.

(sometimes I look at my younger brothers and sister and openly weep for the future, kids just aint bright no mo'e by gershoewitz)