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Burning Fire (Free verse) by EckoSolider The burning fire in my heart
Is the love that is burning for you
The things that you did to me
Turned my heart from fire to ice
Because you shot any hopes for me to love again
If all you should of said if you were sorry
I would have forgave you
I believed that our love would play on for eternity
But since its not ill keep striving to find another love like you
Up the ladder:
Scruffles
Down the ladder:
Sittin Here
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Posted: April 16, 2003 2:33 AM PDT; Last modified: April 16, 2003 2:33 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8569565 Overall Rank: 10461 Comments:
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d35 @ 130.111.0.42
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16-Apr-03/9:42 AM
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i don't like it
"Solider"!!!!! GOD DAMNIT! HAND SALUTE! atteas "solider". you're excused.
(sometimes I look at my younger brothers and sister and openly weep for the future, kids just aint bright no mo'e by gershoewitz) 112 view(s)
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