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Burning Fire (Free verse) by EckoSolider

The burning fire in my heart Is the love that is burning for you The things that you did to me Turned my heart from fire to ice Because you shot any hopes for me to love again If all you should of said if you were sorry I would have forgave you I believed that our love would play on for eternity But since its not ill keep striving to find another love like you

d35 16-Apr-03/9:42 AM
i don't like it




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