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falling (Free verse) by highnightmaregurl
Falling,
Can't seem to catch a grip.
I feel like iam failing
...you.
Of all people i could,
Your the one i shouldn't.
And if i could, i wouldn't.
Iam sorry for what i've done,
Just have mercy,
You are the only one.
If tomorrows another day,
Then can we start over?
I'll find a way.
I'll get to know you better,
And maybe we'll just be friends.
We can write letters
With our favorite pens,
Even if we never see eachother again.
Iam sorry i failed you,
I never meant too,
We can still be friends,
If you choose to.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10470
Posted: July 24, 2003 11:47 PM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2003 11:47 PM PDT
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