falling

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Jul 2003 · 2 comments

Falling, Can't seem to catch a grip. I feel like iam failing ...you. Of all people i could, Your the one i shouldn't. And if i could, i wouldn't. Iam sorry for what i've done, Just have mercy, You are the only one. If tomorrows another day, Then can we start over? I'll find a way. I'll get to know you better, And maybe we'll just be friends. We can write letters With our favorite pens, Even if we never see eachother again. Iam sorry i failed you, I never meant too, We can still be friends, If you choose to.

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[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 25-Jul-03/12:47 AM Reply

A lemming on the art of drowning.

[10] walrus8 25-Jul-03/9:16 AM Reply

Very good indeed! Please post some more poems on poemeranker.com! I will be delighted to read them! Keep up the good work! Cheers! Bye!