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summer feeling (Free verse) by nolan
hmmm......... so it seems that i am not only a physical mifurtune of events but i am actually different i have heard these words a thousand times before you are different do not change but i am not just the same a lost soul searching for that you a person to talk to a person to feel but that isn't different that is called being alone it is hard all you think about is that feeling but some how it turns into lies cheating dis-trust and you are left with anger an emotion of true passion as well as hate no where to go you look into it's eyes feelings are relivant and feelings are real thoughts train your feelings as your feelings touch your mind every night i end up alone and then i am set free just to sit in my cage

Up the ladder: falling
Down the ladder: I'm Back!

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10471
Posted: July 28, 2003 1:10 AM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2003 1:10 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 69.19.177.234 | 28-Jul-03/1:16 AM | Reply
online journal or a poem? i cant tell the difference.
[n/a] nolan @ 65.93.24.70 > SupremeDreamer | 6-Aug-03/1:19 AM | Reply
online journal
[6] DurtKL @ 68.75.22.185 | 28-Jul-03/10:32 AM | Reply
GREASE!
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Jul-03/1:17 PM | Reply
lol. "but that isn't different
that is called being alone" vintage.
[n/a] nolan @ 65.93.24.70 > horus8 | 6-Aug-03/1:20 AM | Reply
are you depressed?
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