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summer feeling (Free verse) by nolan
hmmm.........
so it seems
that i am not only
a physical mifurtune of events
but i am actually different
i have heard these words
a thousand times before
you are different
do not change
but i am not just the same
a lost soul
searching for that you
a person to talk to
a person to feel
but that isn't different
that is called being alone
it is hard
all you think about is that feeling
but some how it turns into lies
cheating
dis-trust
and you are left with anger
an emotion of true passion
as well as hate
no where to go
you look into it's eyes
feelings are relivant
and feelings are real
thoughts train your feelings
as your feelings touch your mind
every night i end up alone
and then i am set free
just to sit in my cage
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Posted: July 28, 2003 1:10 AM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2003 1:10 AM PDT
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