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STIGMA / MUSEHEART

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Jun 2003 · 17 comments

Skin, on an erect penis, burned red to black to red as a bee flew up against The veiny shaft. The little bee Brandished her sting, Tucked in her body, And prepared to attack. Hesitation. The penis trembled. And a great gust of wind Blew tumbled towards the insect. Smoke enclosed her. Blind and Confused, Chemicals kicked in and Her sensory nerves Relaxed. She settled upon the head and Began to suck the sweet nectar. Ambrosia? Not quite. The penises hand reached down Grabbed the pistil, crushing the bee. As the moans of the asian whore echoed from above. *i know stigma is the girl part of the flower but yea..* dedicated to Margaret C. Rigsby she has permission to use this poem too.

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[10] SupremeDreamer 30-Jun-03/2:49 PM Reply

lmao. blessed with 10.

[n/a] JoyLuck › SupremeDreamer 30-Jun-03/2:51 PM Reply

thx
i wrote it in great haste
so there are many mistakes
but i'm not wasting time for
Margaret C.Rigsby
unless...

[10] horus8 30-Jun-03/4:50 PM Reply

Dude, I love you, you beat me to it.

[2] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 1-Jul-03/7:03 AM Reply

Far too Spanish for my tastes

[n/a] JoyLuck › wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 1-Jul-03/10:40 AM Reply

lol what do you mean by Spanish?

[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Jul-03/10:36 AM Reply

I am humbled by your skills. -10-

[7] richa 1-Jul-03/11:08 AM Reply

stigma an interesting word to use.

i think of stigmata which draws a link with the first verse somehow in its explicitness.

[n/a] JoyLuck › richa 1-Jul-03/11:14 AM Reply

1 a archaic : a scar left by a hot iron : BRAND b : a mark of shame or discredit : STAIN c : an identifying mark or characteristic; specifically : a specific diagnostic sign of a disease
2 a stigmata plural : bodily marks or pains resembling the wounds of the crucified Christ and sometimes accompanying religious ecstasy b : PETECHIA
3 a : a small spot, scar, or opening on a plant or animal b : the usually apical part of the pistil of a flower which receives the pollen grains and on which they germinate -- see FLOWER illustration

yea i can see that
lalalala

[7] richa › JoyLuck 1-Jul-03/1:14 PM Reply

i kind of meant stigmata to do with the burning red to black. The kind of violent language, the tight skin

[n/a] deleted user 3-Jul-03/12:24 AM Reply

Well, you can write. Not a bad poem at all. Except my stigma was the 'archaic' version where you are talking about the stamen, I believe.

Peace,

McR

[n/a] JoyLuck › deleted user 3-Jul-03/12:26 AM Reply

i used the archaic definiation also
when it is burned red black red
same of masterbation maybe?
ica n't spell

someone else saw it as a stigmata

[n/a] deleted user › JoyLuck 3-Jul-03/12:40 AM Reply

Well, in my poem depicts the stigma of mental illness, I think the word you want is stamen when the hand reaches down to grab because that would be the feminine (sucking) of the pistil. I think. :)

Here is a free tool for you:

http://www.iespell.com/

Peace,

Margaret

[0] deleted user 9-Jul-03/12:07 AM Reply

For God sake this is a terrible thing to write about a person.

[10] horus8 › deleted user 9-Jul-03/12:09 AM Reply

Yes, and?

[n/a] JoyLuck › deleted user 10-Jul-03/12:06 AM Reply

thanks for telling me

[0] deleted user 21-Jul-03/12:10 AM Reply

Ugh how childish and I cant believe they actually let you online some people are less then human. dont judge by the cover. Please reconsider revising this because it sucks.

[10] DurtKL › deleted user 21-Jul-03/12:20 AM Reply

i'm sorry. joyluck recently had his online privileges revoked...but he has sneaked back online.

btw go fuck yourself in the trough in which musefarts bathes in.