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This poem has been flagged as plagiarised.
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: October 28, 2002 11:02 AM PST; Last modified: October 28, 2002 11:02 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.365529 Overall Rank: 3275 Comments:
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Yardbird @ 212.219.142.161
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11-Nov-02/5:50 AM
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Good stuff, Maria! It flows a lot better than your earlier work, and I think that restricting the length has helped to make your ideas more concise. Overall, nicely done - your poetry just keeps getting better and better! 8 :)
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deleted user @ 98.163.88.36
> Yardbird
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23-Jun-08/5:05 PM
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This poem is fake! All your poems are fake! You have a pathetic need for positive attention, but this positive attention doesn't even belong to you. It belongs to Thomas McGrath!
cancel time--very nice.
Yes, 'cancel time' is very good - I quite like the 'art you make in bed' too.
thank you everyone :) im tryin but sometimes the bad in me gets to me and i write crap all over agin :( but thank u *hugz* lol @ christof well you better try me then innit hehe
"for you lovely shape" could use a little work even by my standards, but my dear, I definitely agree, it gets better
thank u amalea and thank u for al the advice u have given me i know u are right and tht one day i will laugh at myself thank u
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