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Punishment and Punishment again

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Sep 2002 · Edited 23 Sep 2002 · 8 comments

The waves dance,myriads of them, And men die on the dancing waves; God punishes the kingdom of the Sea, Men die;Streams overflow the earth.

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12 votes so far. Yours would make 13.12 votes so far

[9] INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/5:49 AM Reply

Sooooooo much with sooooo little.
This is artful!!!!!! 9

[7] Lenore 23-Sep-02/6:57 AM Reply

As a Woman I feel that this poem is grossly gender bent! ;)

[8] Christof 23-Sep-02/7:05 AM Reply

Whatever happens, men die...

[n/a] Frass › Christof 23-Sep-02/11:12 AM Reply

Good poem, Vlcn; but, it's "a myriad of" not "myriads".

[0] poetandknowit 24-Sep-02/7:04 PM Reply

And what about Annabel Lee? So what? Yawn!

[n/a] Tibbs 26-Sep-02/12:10 AM Reply

Why do you punctuate like that?

[6] pomoxo 18-Jan-03/9:38 PM Reply

crazy

[5] deleted user 21-Jan-03/12:21 PM Reply

too much dancing, not enough death.