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Punishment and Punishment again (Free verse) by vulcan The waves dance,myriads of them,
And men die on the dancing waves;
God punishes the kingdom of the Sea,
Men die;Streams overflow the earth.
Up the ladder:
another funeral
Down the ladder:
Reasons
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: September 22, 2002 11:14 AM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2002 12:50 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.365529 Overall Rank: 3274 Comments:
As a Woman I feel that this poem is grossly gender bent! ;)
Whatever happens, men die...
Good poem, Vlcn; but, it's "a myriad of" not "myriads".
And what about Annabel Lee? So what? Yawn!
Why do you punctuate like that?
crazy
too much dancing, not enough death.
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This is artful!!!!!! 9