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Punishment and Punishment again
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Free verse
) by
vulcan
The waves dance,myriads of them, And men die on the dancing waves; God punishes the kingdom of the Sea, Men die;Streams overflow the earth.
Frass
23-Sep-02/11:12 AM
Good poem, Vlcn; but, it's "a myriad of" not "myriads".
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