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SHAME AND THE OLD MANS CANDLE (Free verse) by Garrett S Sexton Do you like my mask? Isn't it pretty? It raises the dead.
I've been awake all night.I know i'm supposed to teach you self-reliance,
but I can't leave it alone.. Then it happens.
It happens all over the bed.
Up the ladder:
A Matter of Faith
Down the ladder:
The Umpteenth Home
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Posted: July 5, 2003 1:25 AM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2003 1:25 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2689414 Overall Rank: 3876 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.166.154
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5-Jul-03/1:41 AM
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hrmm. interesting. blessed with 7
the tone of the poem seemed so benign as well. I didn't get it until the end
clever
I bet you never imagined that your subtext would be better than your writing Garret.
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