Re: Victoria Applesmack and the Easy to Clean Wonder-Spleen by T. Jonathron Remp	17-Oct-17/2:58 PM
Tardigrades need friends too!
Re: Muslim woman at the office by zodiac	16-Oct-17/2:42 PM
Awww shucks, no husks. The quote from the pool party has no place in the office. 4
Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	16-Oct-17/2:22 PM
I give the comments a 7! Bravo!
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	16-Oct-17/2:14 PM
"I wear only the best" could've been better. Yeah, that line sucks. The rest, flows like stuff that flows good. 6
Re: A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}>	16-Oct-17/2:07 PM
You had me at "coalishly pinched twin sink holes."
Re: Hey by impert&ent	16-Oct-17/1:31 PM
See me.
Re: Skellington Bakery by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	8-Aug-06/7:55 PM
You DO Love me! You really DO Love me! *swoon*
Re: a.m. by oneglove	11-Jul-05/7:41 PM
Shades of Freddy Krueger
Re: a comment on Happy Charlene by Dovina	11-Jul-05/7:35 PM
Read it again. It isn’t positive. It’s depressing as all hell.
Re: a comment on Pandemic’s Here Again by Lenore	8-Jul-05/1:02 PM
FYI http://www.recombinomics.com/whats_new.html
Re: a comment on Pandemic’s Here Again by Lenore	8-Jul-05/10:54 AM
Avian Flu. H5N1
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	8-Jul-05/10:47 AM
It’s strange but I feel guilty. The kind of guilt one might feel after reading someone’s diary. This work is so personal, so strong. It should be rolled up and tied up with the small red string that she left for you in that box. There’s more to say but I can’t. Thank You.
Re: Butterfly Plague by zodiac	8-Jul-05/8:49 AM
"Here's a naked-necked girl laughing in a square, thumbnail sawing an orange-skin. How grey and soft-bodied, these! " Vivid image. I can smell the tang.
Re: a comment on Our Soldiers by Lenore	8-Jul-05/8:17 AM
Yes.
Re: Crack baby by Caducus	6-Jul-05/10:04 AM
Fix line 2 and this is a 10.
Re: A Place by Celtic	6-Jul-05/9:54 AM
This poem could be great. I found it too simple. Perhaps if you gave us more a sense of its Magic. How does this place feel? We know the wind is always calm but how does it look? How does it smell? How is it lit? What time of day are we seeing it, In moonlight, starlight, sunshine? The descriptions are flat and matter of fact and because of this, the poem loses its Magic. I’d love to see this reworked. Paint it more vivid. Take us somewhere enchanted!
Re: Mother Earth by TLRufener	6-Jul-05/9:03 AM
Your poem leaves me with the sense that Mother Earth has no love for winter and that in fact she’s dead throughout the entire season. Is that what you intended?
Re: Because to Live I Must by TLRufener	6-Jul-05/8:49 AM
All the words melt together in an unappealing stew of a novice Witch’s brew.
Re: The And women by INTRANSIT	6-Jul-05/8:42 AM
"plying a fiddle." Interesting poem.
Re: Drowsy by elderking	29-Jun-05/7:30 PM
Yeah, try waltzy.