Poemranker [Poem: Drowsy] [by elderking] Thu Sep 19 14:42:59 PDT 2024

...and yawning came the dawn to nudge the sleepy skies of slow, summer sundays, those waltz, do-not-run days, that lounge, long and lazy in contented julys...

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Up the ladder: it's all about the aeroplanes

Down the ladder: So there is a garden and a ladder

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6895

Posted: June 29, 2005 4:17 AM PDT; Last modified: June 29, 2005 4:17 AM PDT
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[7] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 29-Jun-05/5:14 AM | Reply

>>those waltz<<
Not logical.

[5] Lenore @ 64.252.96.20 | 29-Jun-05/7:30 PM | Reply

Yeah, try waltzy.

[10] Dan garcia-Black @ 66.159.205.165 | 1-Jul-05/5:42 PM | Reply

Those waltz days,
Those do-not-run days,
that lounge... Yeah! Great mood-ivation.

[n/a] elderking @ 4.246.120.57 | 4-Jul-05/1:13 PM | Reply

Thanks for the feedback and for taking the time to read
it. I appreciate it.elderking

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