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Drowsy

Member since 2005 · Posted 29 Jun 2005 · 4 comments

...and yawning came the dawn to nudge the sleepy skies of slow, summer sundays, those waltz, do-not-run days, that lounge, long and lazy in contented julys...

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[7] deleted user 29-Jun-05/5:14 AM Reply

>>those waltz<<
Not logical.

[5] Lenore 29-Jun-05/7:30 PM Reply

Yeah, try waltzy.

[10] Dan garcia-Black 1-Jul-05/5:42 PM Reply

Those waltz days,
Those do-not-run days,
that lounge... Yeah! Great mood-ivation.

[n/a] elderking 4-Jul-05/1:13 PM Reply

Thanks for the feedback and for taking the time to read
it. I appreciate it.elderking