on Death by rabbit by INTRANSIT
6 May 2006, 6:40 AM
Reminds me of the time I had fresh caught rabbit. Tastes like chicken you know.
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2004, 12:51 PM
A problem we all have to face. Except for me as I intend never to work.
on Help me find a poet (This is an actual question, not a poem) by Plaidypus
21 Feb 2005, 11:00 AM
has it occurred to you that several people match that description, it could even be me.....
This is a very good poem, though because of the subject, I can't help but think of it in comparison to the classic "Not waving, but drowning" by Stevie Smith. Considering that's one of my favourite poems of all time, yours stands up really well.
You mention being afraid your life would show, is this meant to indicate a guilty conscience? I noticed you saying you were too proud at the top.
Did you know that drowning is a very peaceful way to die? By the time you're in danger of watching your life flash before your eyes, you're almost completely calm.
You mention being afraid your life would show, is this meant to indicate a guilty conscience? I noticed you saying you were too proud at the top.
Did you know that drowning is a very peaceful way to die? By the time you're in danger of watching your life flash before your eyes, you're almost completely calm.
on How Angels Sleep by Dovina
16 Aug 2005, 3:20 AM
Nice poem. Not my view on angels, but I won't let that detract from it. -8-
on a killer world by AM I EVIL?
17 Aug 2005, 4:34 AM
Oh dear. All in all, I think I wouldn't notice you were gone and I'm trying my hardest to forget. Also, giraffe has an 'e' and in the penultimate line it should be you're not your.
on The Stone Man by Bethy
18 Aug 2005, 7:04 AM
Very poignant.
on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy
18 Aug 2005, 7:06 AM
Fantastic. A privilege to read. -10- and favourite.
on Yellow Leather Innards by PsydewaysTears
18 Aug 2005, 6:53 AM
How odd. -8-
on The Story of Our Lives by woodstock20000
18 Aug 2005, 6:55 AM
Ooh. Philosophical poetry. I like. -8-
on The Moment of Over by Bethy
26 Aug 2005, 4:05 PM
This is an amazing poem. Hope this isn't based on a true story.
-10- and fave
-10- and fave
on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim
12 Oct 2005, 8:46 AM
I thought I'd better resubmit this poem since it's now being published and got me nominated for a Best Poet Award. Just so I could show-off. :D
on My First Hangover by mindsigns
28 Mar 2006, 5:51 AM
Pretty good. Though I never get hangovers.
on You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger
15 Feb 2006, 7:10 AM
Oooh! Spiritual. But more importantly...
Spiders :)
Spiders :)
on A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger
6 Mar 2006, 8:07 AM
Guess you don't need to complain about the lack of comments anymore. :D
on Pain by PoeticJustice
28 Sep 2006, 9:39 AM
OMG!!! I totally feel your pain here dude! Let's like, set fire to shit!!111oneone
on Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) by Ranger
28 Sep 2006, 9:42 AM
Dude! Too many verbs! And no pain or tourture at all? What about making it a love poem? With darkness and shit?