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16-Dec-04/12:51 PM |
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A problem we all have to face. Except for me as I intend never to work.
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| Re: Reality by blacksoul |
16-Dec-04/12:55 PM |
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How unoriginal. I love it. 10
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| Re: Help me find a poet (This is an actual question, not a poem) by Plaidypus |
21-Feb-05/11:00 AM |
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has it occurred to you that several people match that description, it could even be me.....
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| Re: How Angels Sleep by Dovina |
16-Aug-05/3:20 AM |
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Nice poem. Not my view on angels, but I won't let that detract from it. -8-
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| Re: a killer world by AM I EVIL? |
17-Aug-05/4:34 AM |
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Oh dear. All in all, I think I wouldn't notice you were gone and I'm trying my hardest to forget. Also, giraffe has an 'e' and in the penultimate line it should be you're not your.
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| Re: Yellow Leather Innards by PsydewaysTears |
18-Aug-05/6:53 AM |
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| Re: The Story of Our Lives by woodstock20000 |
18-Aug-05/6:55 AM |
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Ooh. Philosophical poetry. I like. -8-
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| Re: The Stone Man by Bethy |
18-Aug-05/7:04 AM |
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| Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy |
18-Aug-05/7:06 AM |
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Fantastic. A privilege to read. -10- and favourite.
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| Re: Home by Bethy |
18-Aug-05/7:12 AM |
Last few lines don't seem to fit as well as the rest, particularly the penultimate. Seems to me like "She'd do anything" would work better, but it's your poem.
And I still give you a -9-
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| Re: Fading.+/ by Lindz14 |
19-Aug-05/5:51 AM |
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This is a most fantastic poem. -8-
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| Re: The Moment of Over by Bethy |
26-Aug-05/4:05 PM |
This is an amazing poem. Hope this isn't based on a true story.
-10- and fave
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| Re: Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
12-Oct-05/8:46 AM |
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I thought I'd better resubmit this poem since it's now being published and got me nominated for a Best Poet Award. Just so I could show-off. :D
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| Re: You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger |
15-Feb-06/7:10 AM |
Oooh! Spiritual. But more importantly...
Spiders :)
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| Re: A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger |
6-Mar-06/8:07 AM |
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Guess you don't need to complain about the lack of comments anymore. :D
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| Re: My First Hangover by mindsigns |
28-Mar-06/5:51 AM |
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Pretty good. Though I never get hangovers.
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| Re: Death by rabbit by INTRANSIT |
6-May-06/6:40 AM |
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Reminds me of the time I had fresh caught rabbit. Tastes like chicken you know.
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| Re: Drowning by Enkidu |
9-May-06/3:26 PM |
This is a very good poem, though because of the subject, I can't help but think of it in comparison to the classic "Not waving, but drowning" by Stevie Smith. Considering that's one of my favourite poems of all time, yours stands up really well.
You mention being afraid your life would show, is this meant to indicate a guilty conscience? I noticed you saying you were too proud at the top.
Did you know that drowning is a very peaceful way to die? By the time you're in danger of watching your life flash before your eyes, you're almost completely calm.
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| Re: Pain by PoeticJustice |
28-Sep-06/9:39 AM |
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OMG!!! I totally feel your pain here dude! Let's like, set fire to shit!!111oneone
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| Re: Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) by Ranger |
28-Sep-06/9:42 AM |
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Dude! Too many verbs! And no pain or tourture at all? What about making it a love poem? With darkness and shit?
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