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The Stone Man (Free verse) by Bethy Sit alone and stare...
like a stone
Watch life pass by...
Its a choice of your own
Making something out of nothing
and nothing out of something...
Just sit there alone...
Getting stoned...
Its a choice of your own.
Up the ladder:
Surfer
Down the ladder:
Racial Hate
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Posted: August 3, 2005 10:35 AM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2005 10:35 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.422622 Overall Rank: 3064 Comments:
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| Broken | @ 202.156.2.82
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5-Aug-05/8:18 AM
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I love this. It's just right. You managed to capture the right emotions in it .. if you get what I mean.
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Bethy @ 24.222.32.211
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5-Aug-05/12:11 PM
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Thank you Broken...yes I do know, and I am pleased to see you noticed... Bethy ;)
Very poignant.
Sounds like it could be the chorus of a NIN song. Cool!
Thankyou...I am glad you liked it...may I ask who NIN is...I am curious to know...:) Bethy
Oh my, you're young.
I wish I was young...lol...pushing the big 40 on the 7th of next month...yikes...Nine Inch Nails...sorry 'bout that...I was suffering from a brain fart!!...now I'm better...lol... and thanks for your comments :) Bethy
Thanks for the compliment...nine inch nails,i clued in later lol...this is actually a part of a song i wrote for my brother...:) Bethy
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