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The Stone Man

Member since 2005 · Posted 3 Aug 2005 · 8 comments

Sit alone and stare... like a stone Watch life pass by... Its a choice of your own Making something out of nothing and nothing out of something... Just sit there alone... Getting stoned... Its a choice of your own.

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[7] | Broken | 5-Aug-05/8:18 AM Reply
I love this. It's just right. You managed to capture the right emotions in it .. if you get what I mean.
[n/a] Bethy › | Broken | 5-Aug-05/12:11 PM Reply
Thank you Broken...yes I do know, and I am pleased to see you noticed... Bethy ;)
[7] Bobjim 18-Aug-05/7:04 AM Reply
Very poignant.
[10] PsydewaysTears 24-Aug-05/10:38 AM Reply
Sounds like it could be the chorus of a NIN song. Cool!
[n/a] Bethy › PsydewaysTears 24-Aug-05/1:06 PM Reply
Thankyou...I am glad you liked it...may I ask who NIN is...I am curious to know...:) Bethy
[n/a] zodiac › Bethy 26-Aug-05/5:07 AM Reply
Oh my, you're young.
[n/a] Bethy › zodiac 29-Aug-05/12:38 PM Reply
I wish I was young...lol...pushing the big 40 on the 7th of next month...yikes...Nine Inch Nails...sorry 'bout that...I was suffering from a brain fart!!...now I'm better...lol... and thanks for your comments :) Bethy
[n/a] Bethy › PsydewaysTears 29-Aug-05/12:44 PM Reply
Thanks for the compliment...nine inch nails,i clued in later lol...this is actually a part of a song i wrote for my brother...:) Bethy