| Re: a comment on Plume Gateau by Bobjim |
24-Mar-08/9:25 AM |
I do wish people would read the comments, then they might notice my frequent admissions to plagiarism.
If only I still had my orange wings people needn't comment so self-righteously.
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| Re: a comment on Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim |
24-Mar-08/9:19 AM |
I've frequently confessed to plagiarism and yet you still felt the need to create a special account just to point it out over and over again. Even on poems where it's been pointed out by other people and I've admitted it. Just a few lines up I've said that I only claim poems are mine until someone spots that they aren't.
Which makes you a stupid loser with too much time on your hands.
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| Re: a comment on Pelted with stones on the common by Bobjim |
24-Mar-08/9:10 AM |
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I stole all these poems by Mr. Rankin 5 years ago. I'm still surprised by people who think they're the first person to spot my plagiary.
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| Re: a comment on Pelted with stones on the common by Bobjim |
24-Mar-08/9:07 AM |
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I have owned up every time someone's spotted that one of 'my' poems actually isn't (at least when I notice). I have frequently stolen poems from various sources and claim all poems on my account are my own work only until someone correctly references the original source.
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| Re: a comment on Down on Dogs by Bobjim |
24-Mar-08/9:02 AM |
bobjim_is_a_thief and Joo, are you both idiots? Have you not noticed my admission several comments above? Have you not noticed the dozens of other poems I've stolen?
Seriously, if you feel the need to accuse me, make sure I haven't already confessed.
Idiots
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| Re: Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) by Ranger |
28-Sep-06/9:42 AM |
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Dude! Too many verbs! And no pain or tourture at all? What about making it a love poem? With darkness and shit?
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| Re: Pain by PoeticJustice |
28-Sep-06/9:39 AM |
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OMG!!! I totally feel your pain here dude! Let's like, set fire to shit!!111oneone
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| Re: Drowning by Enkidu |
9-May-06/3:26 PM |
This is a very good poem, though because of the subject, I can't help but think of it in comparison to the classic "Not waving, but drowning" by Stevie Smith. Considering that's one of my favourite poems of all time, yours stands up really well.
You mention being afraid your life would show, is this meant to indicate a guilty conscience? I noticed you saying you were too proud at the top.
Did you know that drowning is a very peaceful way to die? By the time you're in danger of watching your life flash before your eyes, you're almost completely calm.
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| Re: Death by rabbit by INTRANSIT |
6-May-06/6:40 AM |
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Reminds me of the time I had fresh caught rabbit. Tastes like chicken you know.
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| Re: My First Hangover by mindsigns |
28-Mar-06/5:51 AM |
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Pretty good. Though I never get hangovers.
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| Re: a comment on The jessiness of Jess by Bobjim |
12-Mar-06/6:16 AM |
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The whole poem is merely words. It's written simply for the sake of being written.
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| Re: a comment on Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim |
10-Mar-06/5:13 AM |
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Clearly my methods need not have been quite so perplexing and grim then.
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| Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
8-Mar-06/2:27 PM |
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Well I'm glad you thought it fit the rhythm I set, I didn't think it worked that well.
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| Re: A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger |
6-Mar-06/8:07 AM |
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Guess you don't need to complain about the lack of comments anymore. :D
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| Re: a comment on Pelted with stones on the common by Bobjim |
6-Mar-06/8:04 AM |
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It flows perfectly. By the time I'm finished with you, you'll understand what the line means too.
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| Re: a comment on My cousin by Bobjim |
25-Feb-06/5:35 AM |
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I know. Good isn't it. :)
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| Re: a comment on Pillosophy by Bobjim |
25-Feb-06/5:34 AM |
It is deliberately obscure to inspire the use of philosophical reasoning to determine the precise meaning.
Duh
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| Re: a comment on A smile by Bobjim |
25-Feb-06/5:31 AM |
Given some of my other stuff, what makes you think it tries to be poetry?
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| Re: a comment on Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim |
25-Feb-06/5:30 AM |
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Why thank you. That's just what I was aiming for.
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| Re: a comment on Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim |
16-Feb-06/12:34 PM |
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