| Re: You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger |
15-Feb-06/7:10 AM |
Oooh! Spiritual. But more importantly...
Spiders :)
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| Re: a comment on Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim |
15-Feb-06/6:50 AM |
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As with all my poems, it's mine unless and until someone points out that it isn't.
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| Re: a comment on Down on Dogs by Bobjim |
15-Feb-06/6:43 AM |
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You peraps haven't noticed the comment a few inches up that makes mention of my plagiarising.
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| Re: a comment on Down on Dogs by Bobjim |
15-Feb-06/6:42 AM |
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You perhaps haven't noticed, but this is a really old poem. I'm not trying to do anything with it.
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| Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
17-Oct-05/8:24 AM |
As I said above, I actually started with the title.
And I agree with you, I never thought this one was much good. I just couldn't get the wording right.
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| Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
17-Oct-05/8:21 AM |
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Thanks for the warning. I wasn't going to buy it anyway.
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| Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
13-Oct-05/7:15 AM |
It's not actually Christian.
And it's being published by Poetry.com in a book called Eternal Portraits.
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| Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
13-Oct-05/5:37 AM |
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Do your worst. I'm ready for you.
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| Re: Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
12-Oct-05/8:46 AM |
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I thought I'd better resubmit this poem since it's now being published and got me nominated for a Best Poet Award. Just so I could show-off. :D
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| Re: The Moment of Over by Bethy |
26-Aug-05/4:05 PM |
This is an amazing poem. Hope this isn't based on a true story.
-10- and fave
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| Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim |
22-Aug-05/2:05 AM |
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I hope that was actually as much in support of the poem as it sounded.
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| Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim |
22-Aug-05/2:02 AM |
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Actually, the poem never even mentions anything specifically Biblical, so how can you declare it to be about Old Testament. Especially when I then use the disciples to in my argument for the poem, the disciples who are very much New Testament.
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| Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
22-Aug-05/1:53 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
22-Aug-05/1:52 AM |
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I actually started with the title and wrote the poem around it. There are three other variations but I thought this was the best.
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| Re: a comment on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim |
19-Aug-05/8:32 AM |
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| Re: Fading.+/ by Lindz14 |
19-Aug-05/5:51 AM |
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This is a most fantastic poem. -8-
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| Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim |
19-Aug-05/4:24 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim |
19-Aug-05/4:18 AM |
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You're more than welcome. I'm glad the poem meant so much to you, even if it wasn't in the way I intended.
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| Re: Home by Bethy |
18-Aug-05/7:12 AM |
Last few lines don't seem to fit as well as the rest, particularly the penultimate. Seems to me like "She'd do anything" would work better, but it's your poem.
And I still give you a -9-
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| Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy |
18-Aug-05/7:06 AM |
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Fantastic. A privilege to read. -10- and favourite.
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