poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bobjim (41-60) and replies

Comments byBobjim, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The Stone Man by Bethy 18 Aug 2005, 7:04 AM
Very poignant.
replying on The burden of faith by Bobjim 18 Aug 2005, 7:03 AM
Curious. May I ask why?
on The Story of Our Lives by woodstock20000 18 Aug 2005, 6:55 AM
Ooh. Philosophical poetry. I like. -8-
on Yellow Leather Innards by PsydewaysTears 18 Aug 2005, 6:53 AM
How odd. -8-
on a killer world by AM I EVIL? 17 Aug 2005, 4:34 AM
Oh dear. All in all, I think I wouldn't notice you were gone and I'm trying my hardest to forget. Also, giraffe has an 'e' and in the penultimate line it should be you're not your.
replying on Written while Kayaking by Sasha 17 Aug 2005, 4:27 AM
I know that, it's just not as enjoyable to read as the first verse.
replying on The burden of faith by Bobjim 17 Aug 2005, 3:33 AM
It should have been 'could be eroded'. And it must be taken with the previous few lines, which talk about God only revealing himself through other people. You can't use Biblical references against this line because the Bible is the words of others afterall. If you didn't believe the disciples through the Bible, wouldn't that be eroding your faith?
on How Angels Sleep by Dovina 16 Aug 2005, 3:20 AM
Nice poem. Not my view on angels, but I won't let that detract from it. -8-
replying on Written while Kayaking by Sasha 16 Aug 2005, 3:17 AM
I must concur. As a kayaker myself, the first verse had me all the way. After that I just tailed off to skimming rather than reading.
replying on Down on Dogs by Bobjim 7 Apr 2005, 4:10 AM
s the comments show, you are the first person to notice. Congratulations.

However, in my award acceptance speech, you will notice that I freely admit to having no talent and plagiarising frequently. You pointing me out as a fraud was therefore unnecessary.
on Help me find a poet (This is an actual question, not a poem) by Plaidypus 21 Feb 2005, 11:00 AM
has it occurred to you that several people match that description, it could even be me.....
replying on A smile by Bobjim 16 Dec 2004, 1:17 PM
Very true. It's probably the same poem.
on Reality by blacksoul 16 Dec 2004, 12:55 PM
How unoriginal. I love it. 10
on A Glass of Milk Inagodadavida by EAger to Offend 12 Dec 2004, 1:09 PM
odd
replying on At Sunset by Bobjim 12 Dec 2004, 12:55 PM
Why thank you. I am especially pleased with this one as I was drunk as a monkey when I wrote it.
replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 6:03 PM
id say that depends on whether you mean the poem or the comment, but id be lying. either way, the answers no.
replying on Relativity by Bobjim 10 Dec 2004, 5:59 PM
it is. don't diss.
replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:35 PM
ignoring all but the last 5 words, i take that as a compliment
replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:29 PM
of course i have. like with this poem. i've only read the first line.
on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:14 PM
weird