Re: The Stone Man by Bethy	18-Aug-05/7:04 AM
Very poignant.
Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim	18-Aug-05/7:03 AM
Curious. May I ask why?
Re: The Story of Our Lives by woodstock20000	18-Aug-05/6:55 AM
Ooh. Philosophical poetry. I like. -8-
Re: Yellow Leather Innards by PsydewaysTears	18-Aug-05/6:53 AM
How odd. -8-
Re: a killer world by AM I EVIL?	17-Aug-05/4:34 AM
Oh dear. All in all, I think I wouldn't notice you were gone and I'm trying my hardest to forget. Also, giraffe has an 'e' and in the penultimate line it should be you're not your.
Re: a comment on Written while Kayaking by Sasha	17-Aug-05/4:27 AM
I know that, it's just not as enjoyable to read as the first verse.
Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim	17-Aug-05/3:33 AM
It should have been 'could be eroded'. And it must be taken with the previous few lines, which talk about God only revealing himself through other people. You can't use Biblical references against this line because the Bible is the words of others afterall. If you didn't believe the disciples through the Bible, wouldn't that be eroding your faith?
Re: How Angels Sleep by Dovina	16-Aug-05/3:20 AM
Nice poem. Not my view on angels, but I won't let that detract from it. -8-
Re: a comment on Written while Kayaking by Sasha	16-Aug-05/3:17 AM
I must concur. As a kayaker myself, the first verse had me all the way. After that I just tailed off to skimming rather than reading.
Re: a comment on Down on Dogs by Bobjim	7-Apr-05/4:10 AM
s the comments show, you are the first person to notice. Congratulations. However, in my award acceptance speech, you will notice that I freely admit to having no talent and plagiarising frequently. You pointing me out as a fraud was therefore unnecessary.
Re: Help me find a poet (This is an actual question, not a poem) by Plaidypus	21-Feb-05/11:00 AM
has it occurred to you that several people match that description, it could even be me.....
Re: a comment on A smile by Bobjim	16-Dec-04/1:17 PM
Very true. It's probably the same poem.
Re: Reality by blacksoul	16-Dec-04/12:55 PM
How unoriginal. I love it. 10
Re: A Glass of Milk Inagodadavida by EAger to Offend	12-Dec-04/1:09 PM
odd
Re: a comment on At Sunset by Bobjim	12-Dec-04/12:55 PM
Why thank you. I am especially pleased with this one as I was drunk as a monkey when I wrote it.
Re: a comment on Limbs by Dovina	10-Dec-04/6:03 PM
id say that depends on whether you mean the poem or the comment, but id be lying. either way, the answers no.
Re: a comment on Relativity by Bobjim	10-Dec-04/5:59 PM
it is. don't diss.
Re: a comment on Limbs by Dovina	10-Dec-04/5:35 PM
ignoring all but the last 5 words, i take that as a compliment
Re: a comment on Limbs by Dovina	10-Dec-04/5:29 PM
of course i have. like with this poem. i've only read the first line.
Re: Limbs by Dovina	10-Dec-04/5:14 PM
weird