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a killer world (Free verse) by AM I EVIL? if my world is a vampire
why do i stick my neck out like a giraff's?
just to get it bit and have the life sucked out of me
so here i am left for the dead
i'm on my back thinking did i have a good enough run to call it quits
now?
if I died here would I be remembered?
would anyone even care, would they even notice i was gone?
should i fight for my life?
these are questions a dying man askes himself
i've been told your most alive confronting death
now i understand this vulgar statement
Up the ladder:
So Easy
Down the ladder:
Never Mind
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Posted: August 17, 2005 3:05 AM PDT; Last modified: August 17, 2005 3:06 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.602657 Overall Rank: 12512 Comments:
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Bobjim @ 143.167.132.31
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17-Aug-05/4:34 AM
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Oh dear. All in all, I think I wouldn't notice you were gone and I'm trying my hardest to forget. Also, giraffe has an 'e' and in the penultimate line it should be you're not your.
i think its good u have to try hard to forget me........o and thanx for the lesson
The only thing more annoying than Billy Corgan is somebody quoting Billy Corgan. If you lose that line I'll move you up a notch.
That'll put you at notch one. Sorry I've been waiting a long time to use that line on someone and I figured I couldn't make you any more depressed. I've been in that place before and the only advice I have is get tough and use capital letters when you start sentences. 182 view(s)
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