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a killer world (Free verse) by AM I EVIL?
if my world is a vampire
why do i stick my neck out like a giraff's?
just to get it bit and have the life sucked out of me
so here i am left for the dead
i'm on my back thinking did i have a good enough run to call it quits
now?
if I died here would I be remembered?
would anyone even care, would they even notice i was gone?
should i fight for my life?
these are questions a dying man askes himself
i've been told your most alive confronting death
now i understand this vulgar statement
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.6666666
Weighted score: 4.602657
Overall Rank: 12513
Posted: August 17, 2005 3:05 AM PDT; Last modified: August 17, 2005 3:06 AM PDT
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