poemranker ::Four Wheels, Curves, and Curbs by thekrow

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Free verse № 115424

Four Wheels, Curves, and Curbs

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 Nov 2004 · 2 comments

Smooth and tight, at first it's the best thing you can think of. Fast and furious but your nervous to unleash... Just like a queen full of curves, in all the right places. Quivering as your body moves across the firmness. But alas time goes on; wear and tear appears, the curves sag.Just like every other, once worked in she becomes loose and tosses you on the curb. Then all that's left four wheels, chipped wood and an ashes in the mind of the good times once had.

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[4] celticskatermatt1 12-Nov-04/11:48 AM Reply
it doesnt flow man
[1] horus8 12-Nov-04/4:31 PM Reply
A fat gack of mulched cod.