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a killer world (Free verse) by AM I EVIL?

if my world is a vampire why do i stick my neck out like a giraff's? just to get it bit and have the life sucked out of me so here i am left for the dead i'm on my back thinking did i have a good enough run to call it quits now? if I died here would I be remembered? would anyone even care, would they even notice i was gone? should i fight for my life? these are questions a dying man askes himself i've been told your most alive confronting death now i understand this vulgar statement

ALChemy 19-Aug-05/11:12 AM
The only thing more annoying than Billy Corgan is somebody quoting Billy Corgan. If you lose that line I'll move you up a notch.

That'll put you at notch one.

Sorry I've been waiting a long time to use that line on someone and I figured I couldn't make you any more depressed.

I've been in that place before and the only advice I have is get tough and use capital letters when you start sentences.




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