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Reality (Haiku) by blacksoul People see God every day;
They just don't recognize him.
Up the ladder:
fire has its own logic
Down the ladder:
The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas
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Posted: December 16, 2004 2:55 AM PST; Last modified: December 16, 2004 2:55 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.111111 Overall Rank: 1118 Comments:
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Bobjim @ 195.93.33.11
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16-Dec-04/12:55 PM
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How unoriginal. I love it. 10
The rules of Haiku are precise, and this is not Haiku. Please call it Free Verse. It sounds like an opening statement in need of support or illustration, and capitalization of "Him." Often, when I comment on a religious poem, people think I am putting down the religion, but in this case I am not, only the way it's presented.
what in god's name is this?
Not a Haiku!
This is not a Haiku. bro. before you start posting stuff. read up on the different kinds of poetry. love ya sis.
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