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Reality (Haiku) by blacksoul

People see God every day; They just don't recognize him.

Dovina 16-Dec-04/1:15 PM
The rules of Haiku are precise, and this is not Haiku. Please call it Free Verse. It sounds like an opening statement in need of support or illustration, and capitalization of "Him." Often, when I comment on a religious poem, people think I am putting down the religion, but in this case I am not, only the way it's presented.




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