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A Glass of Milk Inagodadavida (Free verse) by EAger to Offend
Swimming in the summer grass, Crickets singing like sirens. Sucking in the coolness to clarify me and inhaling a tiny ecosystem. I'm at one with the bugs that I breathe, with the dangers of this unmowed lawn, with the neighbours' disaproval And, perhaps, a trip to emergency. All the atoms sharing destinations, All emotions homogenized, In a drink, the secret of life unveiled, Truth momentarily undisguised.

Up the ladder: Tide Pool
Down the ladder: carnivalesque

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5824
Posted: December 12, 2004 3:01 AM PST; Last modified: December 12, 2004 3:01 AM PST
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[n/a] Bobjim @ 172.185.8.51 | 12-Dec-04/1:09 PM | Reply
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[8] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 12-Dec-04/6:56 PM | Reply
Your title is a confusingly worded sign in West Virginia. Once past it, the grass is green.
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