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A Glass of Milk Inagodadavida (Free verse) by EAger to Offend
Swimming in the summer grass,
Crickets singing like sirens.
Sucking in the coolness to clarify me
and inhaling a tiny ecosystem.
I'm at one with the bugs that I breathe,
with the dangers of this unmowed lawn,
with the neighbours' disaproval
And, perhaps, a trip to emergency.
All the atoms sharing destinations,
All emotions homogenized,
In a drink, the secret of life unveiled,
Truth momentarily undisguised.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5802
Posted: December 12, 2004 3:01 AM PST; Last modified: December 12, 2004 3:01 AM PST
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