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The Story of Our Lives (Free verse) by woodstock20000
Our lives are like storybooks; whether a novel or a sentence: We write the words, but life gives us the punctuation. In anycase, one must remember, even in the end of our chapters: Death is not the period; only a semicolon.

Up the ladder: Mixed Feelings
Down the ladder: grampa told us stories

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9588
Posted: August 17, 2005 12:10 PM PDT; Last modified: August 17, 2005 12:10 PM PDT
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[9] Bethy @ 24.222.32.211 | 17-Aug-05/12:14 PM | Reply
good poem...how about this for a last line...

In the life hereafter...;)

I really like this...its a fav!!! Bethy
[8] Bobjim @ 143.167.132.21 | 18-Aug-05/6:55 AM | Reply
Ooh. Philosophical poetry. I like. -8-
[n/a] ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69 | 19-Aug-05/8:51 AM | Reply
Death is a semi-colon hmmm...
Makes sense.
I always thought he did things half-assed
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