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The Story of Our Lives (Free verse) by woodstock20000

Our lives are like storybooks; whether a novel or a sentence: We write the words, but life gives us the punctuation. In anycase, one must remember, even in the end of our chapters: Death is not the period; only a semicolon.

Bethy 17-Aug-05/12:14 PM
good poem...how about this for a last line...

In the life hereafter...;)

I really like this...its a fav!!! Bethy




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