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if really its me (Free verse) by Landon2
sometimes i feel ive lost my mind,
the truth of my identity i just cant seem to find,
buried deep in the sea lies my true self,
but i bury it deeper trying to gain recgonition and wealth,
ive put who i am on the very top shelf,
and dusted off the identity of everyone else,
ive shot a hole through my soul,
im my charecter but play a someone elses role,
in my eyes i cant just see,
everyday i look in the mirror and wonder if its really me.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9627
Posted: September 20, 2006 9:11 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2006 9:11 PM PDT
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