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lunch (Free verse) by ay deee we gotta this done today
but now its noon
sit down
we will all get around to
our pounding and grinding
after we eat a little something
have a coke
have a smoke or two
shoot the shit
i heard you're goin' huntin this weekend
i heard the war's on
i heard the man say if we don't
get those beams welded by thursday
and the last of those barrels emptied
and if this rain don't stop
we're gonna miss deadline
Up the ladder:
Sleep It All Away
Down the ladder:
Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent)
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Posted: September 3, 2005 7:46 PM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2005 7:46 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9611 Comments:
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Bethy @ 24.222.32.194
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5-Sep-05/5:03 AM
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I like this, it is just the kind of stuff you hear at lunch...cool :) Bethy
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ay deee @ 24.255.87.123
> Bethy
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5-Sep-05/7:17 AM
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thank you, i've been thinking about work a lot lately.
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