poemranker ::lunch by ay deee

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Free verse № 130558

lunch

Member since 2005 · Posted 3 Sep 2005 · 2 comments

we gotta this done today but now its noon sit down we will all get around to our pounding and grinding after we eat a little something have a coke have a smoke or two shoot the shit i heard you're goin' huntin this weekend i heard the war's on i heard the man say if we don't get those beams welded by thursday and the last of those barrels emptied and if this rain don't stop we're gonna miss deadline

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[7] Bethy 5-Sep-05/5:03 AM Reply
I like this, it is just the kind of stuff you hear at lunch...cool :) Bethy
[n/a] ay deee › Bethy 5-Sep-05/7:17 AM Reply
thank you, i've been thinking about work a lot lately.