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lunch (Free verse) by ay deee

we gotta this done today but now its noon sit down we will all get around to our pounding and grinding after we eat a little something have a coke have a smoke or two shoot the shit i heard you're goin' huntin this weekend i heard the war's on i heard the man say if we don't get those beams welded by thursday and the last of those barrels emptied and if this rain don't stop we're gonna miss deadline

Bethy 5-Sep-05/5:03 AM
I like this, it is just the kind of stuff you hear at lunch...cool :) Bethy




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