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mask; an infidelity (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
i like to pull my fruits from hands too greasy to hold on and take a few bites before those hands discover soap and grab back tightly.

Up the ladder: WAR04
Down the ladder: honey bee

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9578
Posted: December 6, 2005 2:41 AM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2005 2:41 AM PST
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[8] cyan9 @ 217.40.63.105 | 6-Dec-05/2:44 AM | Reply
Pleasantly Confusing
[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 6-Dec-05/3:14 AM | Reply
How dare you steal from those poor Mexicans selling oranges on the street. They need every penny they can get to buy soap.
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