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Desprately Seeking Arcadia (Free verse) by syntheticcream
I am just drifting from day to day
Trying desprately to make my way.
My souls not dead it's asleep,
It seems to be so worthless and weak.
My soul's not dead just resting
Waiting, hoping to wake and rise.
So take me from the place i'm resting
To a place of truth and not lies.
The place were dreamers go
To frolic in the harsh white snow.
There, the talented all gather,
And only the important will matter.
So help me save my soul tonight
From it's dark, deep and decolate sleep,
Take it to see the most wonderful sights,
Take it there and it will be there to keep.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9607
Posted: February 25, 2005 10:55 AM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2005 10:55 AM PST
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