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My Life (Free verse) by RION12
I always hear, "Your parents will always be there for me." I think of that and I see that someone told me a lie. My mom is not there when I cry or feel sad. My real dad just got up and left. My fake dad doesn't come and see me. He doesn't even call to say hi. I wish I could tell him good-bye. My mom's boyfriend don't help. He makes matters wrost. He makes my life more of a living hell. My life will be the same forever. Nothing will ever change. Why am I glued to this life. To this hell of mine. My life

Up the ladder: Gaping Hole
Down the ladder: Down

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9601
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 6, 2005 9:09 PM PDT
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[7] zodiac @ 212.118.19.111 | 7-May-05/4:49 AM | Reply
Your parents will always be there for me.
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