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Relativity (Free verse) by Bobjim
The misers act so generous, When the smallest gift they place. The cruel become exalted, When a little love they give. The vengeful's act of pardon Is the greatest act of grace, For like the laws of Einstein Even these are relative.

Up the ladder: regret
Down the ladder: conscience (working title)

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8404
Posted: December 9, 2004 4:03 AM PST; Last modified: December 9, 2004 4:03 AM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 10-Dec-04/5:29 PM | Reply
The first six lines are good, but Einstein's Relativity is not "like" these things.
[n/a] Bobjim @ 172.189.0.164 > Dovina | 10-Dec-04/5:59 PM | Reply
it is. don't diss.
[6] Blue Magpie @ 212.205.251.35 | 26-Feb-06/12:02 AM | Reply
OK
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