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Relativity (Free verse) by Bobjim The misers act so generous,
When the smallest gift they place.
The cruel become exalted,
When a little love they give.
The vengeful's act of pardon
Is the greatest act of grace,
For like the laws of Einstein
Even these are relative.
Up the ladder:
To Think I Am
Down the ladder:
A Letter Home
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Posted: December 9, 2004 4:03 AM PST; Last modified: December 9, 2004 4:03 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.970199 Overall Rank: 8425 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.6.101
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10-Dec-04/5:29 PM
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The first six lines are good, but Einstein's Relativity is not "like" these things.
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Bobjim @ 172.189.0.164
> Dovina
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10-Dec-04/5:59 PM
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it is. don't diss.
OK
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