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Relativity
(
Free verse
) by
Bobjim
The misers act so generous, When the smallest gift they place. The cruel become exalted, When a little love they give. The vengeful's act of pardon Is the greatest act of grace, For like the laws of Einstein Even these are relative.
Dovina
10-Dec-04/5:29 PM
The first six lines are good, but Einstein's Relativity is not "like" these things.
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