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Free verse № 126060

deliberate

Member since 2005 · Posted 2 Jun 2005 · 1 comment

Preliminary fears Crowd her mind Sought a gateway moisten with sublime deliberate moves Around the brow In crude endevours Seeking the earth Gray heavens..Rise Curtain her tears Let your fury Drown her fears Escort her And reverberate Illusions which Painfully sear Heavens …. Pour down As she bitterly weeps Embrace her Amid all animosity The lane’s bare Oblivion stares Vulnerable Like a virgin She cannot dare

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[2] deleted user 2-Jun-05/4:18 PM Reply
Slightly better than the rest, but
<< …. >>
is totally unnecessary.