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deliberate (Free verse) by shrutikay Preliminary fears
Crowd her mind
Sought a gateway
moisten with sublime
deliberate moves
Around the brow
In crude endevours
Seeking the earth
Gray heavens..Rise
Curtain her tears
Let your fury
Drown her fears
Escort her
And reverberate
Illusions which
Painfully sear
Heavens â¦. Pour down
As she bitterly weeps
Embrace her
Amid all animosity
The laneâs bare
Oblivion stares
Vulnerable
Like a virgin
She cannot dare
Up the ladder:
Fascists
Down the ladder:
Pity Her
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Posted: June 2, 2005 11:59 AM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2005 11:59 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.970199 Overall Rank: 8471 Comments:
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is totally unnecessary.