Re: An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos	4-Feb-03/10:56 AM
Drow?
Re: Feeling by chicka_babe05	4-Feb-03/10:34 AM
"state of selfhood"? What the hell is that supposed to mean? Seriously, though, your eloquent and moving use of "you" to rhyme with "you" shall surely put you solidly into our grand poetic tradition. You may even dethrone shakespeare! One thing, though: wouldn't the touch of someone's eyes be all squishy and gooey? Not to mention painful for the other person. Lastly, leave God out of this poeme. I asked the big guy, YH-to-the-VH about you and he said, "Never heard of her." Then he fell back asleep. However, the archangel Jibreel did say that you deserve a zero for this lump of solidified porcupine smegma. Who am I to defy divine will
Re: Kaolin Fire is SHIT by poemwanker	3-Feb-03/9:04 AM
Wuv!
Re: a comment on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin	3-Feb-03/9:02 AM
You better be. She was a fluffy adorable thing.
Re: Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	2-Feb-03/4:43 PM
nice addition.
Re: Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus	2-Feb-03/4:36 PM
What about the Silver surfer?
Re: American Idol epiphany in haiku by Shardik	2-Feb-03/4:33 PM
that's it in a nutshell. an appropriate receptacle. 10. rock on.
Re: NASA Fireworks by TheDevil	2-Feb-03/4:30 PM
Explosions rock. Icarian joy and gladness.
Re: a comment on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin	2-Feb-03/4:29 PM
aww..whadda you know? the vodka was warm anyway, hence the need for ice.
Re: a comment on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin	2-Feb-03/4:24 PM
Limonade's adorable hamster died and we can't bury her until the ground thaws. So she will continue to sit in a plastic bag labeled "Hamster" until we can put her to rest. Now ya know.
Re: Jesus rides the comet by Shardik	31-Jan-03/12:03 PM
Damn fine. quality use of imagery. "Dracula sold out to the japanese" and "Atlas shrugs, I guess he's got the clap again" are mighty good. splendiferous
Re: For Brianna by MaliqaTara	31-Jan-03/12:00 PM
The sincerity of the emotion comes through really well. As a poem, it has some technical flaws, but not to any huge degree. I'm not even going to say anything blasphemous because of the religious content. Needs a little polishing, but has some shine already.
Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik	31-Jan-03/11:55 AM
Very nice. I go for walks through shoulder-high snowbanks. It's dark and echoey.
Re: Equality by Freethinker1602	31-Jan-03/9:42 AM
Aww..and you even think we care about your sad sad pain of runny eyeliner...here's a zero-flavoured lollipop.
Re: The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602	31-Jan-03/9:39 AM
The redeeming part was the "know my pian" bit. Funniest twist ever. All this time I was reading what looked like a Serious and Heartfelt Poeme, but pian was a great satirical twist. Of course if it really is just a typo, that makes you an illiterate fucktard.
Re: Amelioration is only relative by Freethinker1602	31-Jan-03/9:37 AM
Enter, readers at your own riske, for here there be angst. And shab-ass angst at that.
Re: Thursday by w~* ATHENA *~w	31-Jan-03/9:34 AM
I like seeing the very deformed. They amuse me.
Re: a comment on Love spank by Shardik	31-Jan-03/9:32 AM
"You don't scare me. That could be anyone's ass" -Mayor quimby, the simpsons
Re: Love spank by Shardik	30-Jan-03/12:56 PM
Absolutely Splendid! You're awfully pushy for a bottom, though. you know what impertinence means....To the rack! you can take this 10 with you, though.
Re: The Sunset Blvd. Cabbage limericks by Shardik	30-Jan-03/12:54 PM
Mmm..soy lattes.